Hannaford, headquartered in Scarborough, Maine, said it became aware of unusual credit card activity on February 27 and began an investigation. It said the data was illegally accessed during the credit card authorization process.
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It%26#039;s the second sentence.
%26quot;It said the [pieces of] data were illegally accessed during the credit card authorization process.%26quot; But THIS has a problem too. Let me try it again.
%26quot;The company explained that someone illegally accessed the data during the credit card authorization.%26quot; THERE you go!
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Actually, I think it reads well. I wouldn%26#039;t change it.
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On February 27, Hannaford Headquarters in Scarborough, Maine started an investigation after they became aware of unusual credit card activity. Hannaford said that the data was illegally accessed during the credit card authorization process.
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What is the source? Companies don%26#039;t speak on their own.
Unusual credit card activity, oberved on February 27, has initiated an investigation by Hannaford, of Scarborough, Maine. It suspects data was illegally accessed during credit card authorization procedures.
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